The child was physically and verbally assaulted by a group of people at a park south of Brisbane on Saturday evening.
Brisbane, QLD
Child assaulted, hospitalised in alleged racial attack
From the report
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Calmest first.
- The Age Child assaulted, hospitalised in alleged racial attack plain
- The Age Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party plain
- The Age Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack plain
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A summary of The Age’s report, scored on this summary only.
How calmly it was written
The Age, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald and WAtoday also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Ageas they published this story | 97.9 |
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The same event elsewhere
8 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.
The Age
Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party
Niral 95.9 · calm
political 0
Brisbane Times
Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party
Niral 95.9 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party
Niral 95.9 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party
Niral 95.9 · calm
political 0
The Age
Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack
Niral 97.9 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack
Niral 97.9 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack
Niral 97.9 · calm
political 0
Brisbane Times
Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack
Niral 97.9 · calm
political 0